Thursday, 11 May 2017

Major Project Research - Apostasy and Religious Satire

This is pervious research I did back in 2016 to gather religious information to shape my main character Henry.

My main character Henry at the end of this film journey, is filled with worries and depression as he know he can never be what his family wants him to be.

There is a word which resembles rebellion to ones religion and that word is Apostasy, with within definition means:


The word itself is from the Greek word “apostasia” and is very much like renouncing or disassociating oneself from a particular religion or certain religious beliefs. It is similar to a rejection of beliefs that were once held and accepting different beliefs and might even be a renunciation of the beliefs that were previously held.

Apostasy can also be considered abandonment or defiance of what was previously held to be true and practiced and rebelling against those same beliefs and practices. Someone or some group who does this are considered an apostate.


(pathos.com (2017) At: http://www.patheos.com/blogs/christiancrier/2015/05/21/what-is-apostasy-a-biblical-definition-of-apostasy/ (Accessed on 10/05/2017).



So in order to make my main character understand that he must rebel in order to be free he must his visit to the delinquents meaningful. It must be a learning experience he must never forget.

I had previously made sure to research the region so as not to seem to make fun of it, or if controversy was involved that made it look like I knew nothing of the religion, it would make it look offensive to the wrong people.



Deeper Investigations gave me a clearer perspective on Jehovah’s Witness faith and also religious satire.  Le Boeuf’s article and illustration, this helped me develop the part where because of his upbringing; Henry becomes confused when he experiences the so called sinful behaviour of the delinquents.






Le Boeuf, M. (2007) "The Power of Ridicule: An Analysis of Satire" In: Senior Honours Projects. Paper 63 [online] At: http://digitalcommons.uri.edu/srhonorsprog/63 (Accessed on 16/12/2016).



like some comedies, some of the content if offensive and most of them have been called into question. That is why in my opinion comedy writing has been trapped within a steal cage the only key is in the hands of lots of religious, sensitive individuals who either can't take the joke or just don't what to be made fun of in general. 

Most comedies are targeted at relatively new audiences. Gamers, geeks, the rich and the powerful but yet nothing so outrageous. 'Father Ted' was on of the first comedies to aim the humour towards at the Christian religion  and became a smash hit. The comedy revolved around making fun of the Christian roles and statuses and the lifestyle that came with that.











From being room mates with other Fathers and priests as well as the funny adventures they could get up to. Making look like a minor sin look like it was the Apocalypse. One episode even revolved around the stealing of a whistle and making the hugest deal out of it. With this however came the comedy, the overtaking to the simplest thing and yet that is why it is funny and the satire worked for this show.

The key is cleaver writing (in my opinion). It is making so that the key target of the comedy isn't ridiculed but yet have sneaky honesty attached to it. As you think around certain situations, you think how would that person react to that. If he or she were to do that, would that be funny? 

That is why I revolved the script around the lifestyles, rules and regulations that the Jehovah's Witness religion. So that my main character would fall into traps set my the Delinquents making you think, what is he going to do? How is he going to react?

Some of the rules involve:
  • Not celebrating Birthdays or Holidays
  • No loud music
  • No sinful video games or content. (Even Harry Potter because it involves witch craft which connects to the Devil).
  • No blood transfusions as they have a rule about eating blood. 

With rules like these I can make the story funny by having the main character getting involved with these activities but also to aim up a little drama to give to the main character reasons to leave and abandon his religion.








My plans for the future - Professional Practice

I really like directing and having experience at PQA, I had major experience in directing and teaching children in film and television.

Even for my final major project I managed to hire two child actors to act in my film, Gabriel and Harrison. Plus while searching up on Guardian jobs in the filming section I came upon this:



JOB ROLE:

Recruiter NCS THE CHALLENGE -




















Film Practitioners support up to 13 young people during the NCS Team Challenge, helping them to learn skills which enable them to interact with the local community. We are looking for passionate individuals with previous experience of facilitating media groups and an interest in working with young people. Successful candidates should be ready for a demanding but rewarding role as part of an intensive summer programme, and will engage their team with their community partner as much as with the skill they are learning.


The Film Practitioner is responsible for leading three day sessions teaching basic film-making and editing skills to a team of up to 13 15 – 17 year olds. The Practitioner also leads two visits to a local community group (including care homes, youth clubs and homeless centres) so that the young people can use the skills they have learnt to interact with the people that they meet. Finally, the Practitioner works with the young people to design and deliver a showcase presentation, showcasing short films made with the community group.


Skills required:

  • Working with young people
  • Giving them film based activities, and event planning
  • Film and television media knowledge and experience

Team building:
  • Making sure the youth people are safe as they are taken out for a community centres and youth clubs to help plan events and films.
  • Putting teams together to help them come up with short film ideas and putting them together.

About the Organisation and the NCS Programme  The Challenge is a fast-growing social enterprise that connects and inspires people across Britain to strengthen their communities. We work on a local level to bring together people from all ages, ethnicities and walks of life, connecting communities and building trust.




I think this would benefit me greatly and knowing I have the experience and knowledge to do more and go further with my understanding of teaching younger people I can still do what I love. Making films, storytelling and Directing. 


How this will further benefit me:
  • More experience
  • Bigger payment than PQA
  • Good travel experience
  • Planning and organising developments
  • Big opportunities to get connected into the world of film and submit content being made by the company into festivals and social media so my talent can further progress
  • Plus (in my opinion) this sounds like a lot of fun

I believe this job will further develop my professional practice into the industry, and further bring my career into vision and how I can pressure my dream job into getting ready for bigger things.




Major Project - House of Delinquents Final Poser (Ready for Press)


Wednesday, 10 May 2017

Major Project - Production Company Logo

This has always been in discussion but my group had been talking over the course of our filming production and we came up with a cleaver logo and company name to suit each one of our projects.


Company name - Essential/ Nice Productions





We came up with the name while working together on set. Since our directing styles were all different we would always end up asking each other the same question... 


"Is that shot essential? Or is it just nice?"


In a way it was a running joke and we thought it would make a cleaver production company name to suit all of our films.



Pre Production Book - PDF

My Pre Production book (House of Delinquents)


With this link, it will add the PDF file to view my work:


drive.google.com/file/d/0B43EBT7WNQMMakhrSmQzNzNIQzg/view?usp=sharing






Friday, 5 May 2017

Major Project Research and inspiration - Script Writing in Comedy (Ben Elton)

Writing for comedy is difficult as lots of things in comedy that are potentially funny are closed off as most subjects tackled today can be taken as an offence. People in todays society I feel are very sensitive when being thrown a specific joke. When talking about the war, British comedies such as 'Allo, Allo' based on the second world war in France when the Germans invaded was taken at first as a great offence as some wives who had husbands who dies in the war didn't think that war was a particular matter to made fun of.  Not only so, but the matter of racial stereotyping was also taken into matter. Making fun of British manners, French lust and traditions, German informant and Italian  motivations and logical ways of thinking.

In this live show/ documentary celebration the reunion of 'Allo Allo' cast, a segment is played on the particular debate to the humour that is presented in the show and what people initially thought of it. Half stated they found it offensive because some of their families died in the war. However some of the families who served the war found it hilarious.

(See from 2:17)










CJDone. (2013). Return of Allo Allo 7. [Online Video]. 18 April 2013. Available from: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GsLvIog3KPY&t=320s. [Accessed: 5 May 2017].



However the rise in fandom for this series stood out as now there are low budget plays performed by amateur actors and the show is still being played on television channels such as Gold to this very day.



Writing for comedy can be a risk and often most risks turn out to be a success, a big example is the film 'Monty Python's Life of Brian' which got a live debate between representatives of a religion, a Bishop and a born Christian, and two of the Pythons, John Cleese and Michael Palin.











Stephen Huitson. (2011). Friday Night, Saturday Morning - Monty Python's Life of Brian. [Online Video]. 16 November 2011. Available from: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CeKWVuye1YE. [Accessed: 5 May 2017].



The debate ended up being a win for the Pythons as in the end the debate ended down to, if you are offered by certain content in the form of film, then you have the power to not go and see it. Therefore you have nothing to be offended by or get upset about. With a twist it turns out the religion debate team didn't see the first 10 minutes of the film, there was a crucial part where the wise men find out where the real Jesus Christ is being birthed and go to see him and forget about the main character Brain.

Therefore the act of being offensive in comedy was taken into consideration and was demolished by the cleverness of the comedy at the same time.

In the parody of the debate of comedy, John Cleese's character stands up to Michel's character and discusses why being offensive is not entirely that bad.








Right. Where was I?
Being offensive. Being offensive,
thank you. What is the worst
that could happen?
You'll stop talking to me?
Heaven forfend!
What will probably happen?
You'll be upset for a bit
and then forget about it.
What's the best that can happen?
Maybe you'll think
"John's got a point.
"My wife does look like a man
"and her soup does taste fucking
awful. Maybe I should leave her."
I've been able to keep
my marriage together thanks.
That's the spirit!
Besides, we haven't
been offensive, Mike.
People just like complaining.
The British love complaining.
Complaining about the weather,
complaining about the government,
the fucking darkies, the fucking
queers, Noel fucking Edmonds
and his Multi-Cunting Swap Shop.
When it comes to the British
you can't please any of the people
any of the time, and you know why
they like complaining so much?
Maybe because deep down they know
there is no fucking God and it takes
their mind off the fact that their
lives are a pathetic sham that won't
amount to a hill of shitty beans.
Are you going to be like this
on the TV?
Yes, I am.

Read more: http://www.springfieldspringfield.co.uk/movie_script.php?movie=holy-flying-circusRight. Where was I?
Being offensive. Being offensive,
thank you. What is the worst
that could happen?
You'll stop talking to me?
Heaven forfend!
What will probably happen?
You'll be upset for a bit
and then forget about it.
What's the best that can happen?
Maybe you'll think
"John's got a point.
"My wife does look like a man
"and her soup does taste fucking
awful. Maybe I should leave her."
I've been able to keep
my marriage together thanks.
That's the spirit!
Besides, we haven't
been offensive, Mike.
People just like complaining.
The British love complaining.
Complaining about the weather,
complaining about the government,
the fucking darkies, the fucking
queers, Noel fucking Edmonds
and his Multi-Cunting Swap Shop.
When it comes to the British
you can't please any of the people
any of the time, and you know why
they like complaining so much?
Maybe because deep down they know
there is no fucking God and it takes
their mind off the fact that their
lives are a pathetic sham that won't
amount to a hill of shitty beans.
Are you going to be like this
on the TV?
Yes, I am.

Read more: http://www.springfieldspringfield.co.uk/movie_script.php?movie=holy-flying-circus


This comes to my inspiration 'The Young Ones' came from the comedic writings of Ben Elton. Who has not only worked on the Young ones but has gone on to do many aspects of comedy such Blackadder staring Rowan Atkinson.










The thing about Ben Elton's writing that really applied to me and my project was it was the fact that it was a classic style of British comedy that you just don't see or hear. UK shows like 'Mrs Browns Boys' is as close to British to old style black comedy as you could get.
  • Slap Stick humor.
  • Rude language.
  • Cleaver writing to not only challenge the audience but also delivers a bigger punch line.
  • Making fun of controversial subjects like Religion, stereotypes, politics, and rarely on race.
  • Even Death itself



For one thing one of his earlier writings I have of my disposal is in fact the entire scripts and stories of his work on the TV series 'Blackadder'.









Curtis, R,. Elton, B., Lloyd, J and Atkinson, R. (1999) Black Adder the Whole Damn Dynasty 1484-1917. London: Penguin Books.




With help of his writing style and hints from this book I will manage to boots the sarcasm of Roberts character and the comedy in general. This handy book also includes:


  • Blackadder's best insults
  • All scripts from all episodes
  • Possible handy tips for script writing (weather it would be relevant in todays industry(.






Right. Where was I?
Being offensive. Being offensive,
thank you. What is the worst
that could happen?
You'll stop talking to me?
Heaven forfend!
What will probably happen?
You'll be upset for a bit
and then forget about it.
What's the best that can happen?
Maybe you'll think
"John's got a point.
"My wife does look like a man
"and her soup does taste fucking
awful. Maybe I should leave her."
I've been able to keep
my marriage together thanks.
That's the spirit!
Besides, we haven't
been offensive, Mike.
People just like complaining.
The British love complaining.
Complaining about the weather,
complaining about the government,
the fucking darkies, the fucking
queers, Noel fucking Edmonds
and his Multi-Cunting Swap Shop.
When it comes to the British
you can't please any of the people
any of the time, and you know why
they like complaining so much?
Maybe because deep down they know
there is no fucking God and it takes
their mind off the fact that their
lives are a pathetic sham that won't
amount to a hill of shitty beans.
Are you going to be like this
on the TV?
Yes, I am.

Read more: http://www.springfieldspringfield.co.uk/movie_script.php?movie=holy-flying-circus

House of Delinquents Additional Work

Production Budget:






I knew the majority of the budget would go towards some of the people I was going to hire in order to make my project stand out, such as the animator, and make artist.
However working with my production designer I knew I would be buying a lot of essential props for my characters. The table read I had with my crew before hand really helped me know what actors could provide for me in terms of costume and items they would use.


Above and bellow the line in expenditure:

In terms of expenses for my film, there is in professional terms, putting that money to use. Above and Bellow the line. In marketing and business, these lines are used in different ways one such aspects is for film. According to lynda.com:

'Typically, above the line costs deal with creatives such as directors (even first assistant directors), producers, writers, and actors, while below the line costs consist of filmcrew and post production team members.'

lynda.com (2017) Above the line vs below the line. At: https://www.lynda.com/Filmmaking-tutorials/Above-line-vs-below-line/129018/493059-4.html (Accessed on 05/05/2017).


For my film particular, I believe that my film with a simple budget as this, I needed to show bellow the line costs as the majority of the money went to my film crew and post production team members.


Contracts from my main actors:











Call Sheet Example:










Risk Assessments: