Idea Update and Development

Due to the last 1 to 1 with Simon, I feel that the idea I have is too complicated for a major project, although I have my idea I just need to make it simpler. For a story involving delinquents living together in a house what type of story could occur.

There can be a story but it just doesn't have to be complicated and involve looking of feeling like it can be a tv series. My idea just needs a story, a film story, not an episode with a clip hanger. A beginning, a middle and an end.

Then it came to me, there is a main character but he is not a student at all, but instead it's a story involving a religious conversion but reversed. This comedy takes this jehovah's Witness to the house of these rude and dangerous people, but because of these people he comes to released thought he stay that there is no god and the twist is that the only person converted thought the whole film is himself.

The jehovah's Witness's backstory shows him sining with listening to loud music (e.g. rock n roll) and he insert in females, though most of his life and his parents resented him for that and so in order to get respect for his parents and redeem himself from his past sins he becomes a servant of god and tries to convert as many people as he can to repent for what he has done.


Beginning:
It begins with a jehovah's Witness making a journey to this house being his next destination on a journey of conversion and redemption. As the story goes on these terrible delinquents are students at a university house living together but due to neglecting cleaning as well as their studies for that matter an inspector is expected to come to their residence and if they do not meet this inspector's liking they are going to get thrown out.

Middle:
Next the jehovah's Witness comes in the picture, and know their state of mind the delinquents think that the jehovah's Witness is the inspector and try to stall or scare him away with just their hobbies and living space. With heavy metal music that they enjoy, video games, pranks and all of their fighting, the jehovah's Witness begins to realise that all of their sining has not effected them at all.

Ending:
In the end, the other characters find out what they thought was the inspector was actually the jehovah's Witness and get really angry. In return the jehovah's Witness has had enough and decides that all along that if there even was a god in the first place he wouldn't of created such delinquents such as the other characters. He runs away to live his life as he want to.  The delinquents think that the inspector isn't coming and as a result it was a complete waste of time and begin destroying their house again until the real inspector shows up.


This story is still within the realms of a dark comedy and will last 10 - 15 minutes. With the Pre Production Package containing:

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